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by DIRUSNOCTIS
Sun Jun 10, 2018 10:21 pm
Forum: Writers Showcase
Topic: If I wrote this would you read it.
Replies: 2
Views: 1489

If I wrote this would you read it.

Sorry to disappoint you but this is a question not a story. If I wrote a story about children who are serial killers would anyone read it.
by DIRUSNOCTIS
Sun Jun 10, 2018 10:19 pm
Forum: Writers Showcase
Topic: DEATH FROM THE DEATHSON FAMILY
Replies: 7
Views: 3490

Re: DEATH FROM THE DEATHSON FAMILY

Don't take this the wrong way but I didn't get scared at all. You need to work on creating suspense and putting characters at risk in a way that scares people.
by DIRUSNOCTIS
Sun Jun 10, 2018 1:59 am
Forum: Introductions
Topic: My Future creepypastas.
Replies: 0
Views: 936

My Future creepypastas.

Hello, I love writing horror and I enjoy it almost as much as every other fun thing I do. On the original site creepypasta.com, I will start to write creepypastas based on terrifying nightmares I had as a child, Japanese mythology, mythology in general and the Supernatural. (If I get them submitted....
by DIRUSNOCTIS
Sun Jun 10, 2018 1:58 am
Forum: Writers Showcase
Topic: Horror Origins: Death Speaks
Replies: 1
Views: 1217

Re: Horror Origins: Death Speaks

I wouldn't call it scary but I'll admit it was a bit creepy and had a well thought out plot twist.
by DIRUSNOCTIS
Sun Jun 10, 2018 1:53 am
Forum: Writers Workshop
Topic: The Brook Valley Cemetery (Please Review)
Replies: 2
Views: 2187

Re: The Brook Valley Cemetery (Please Review)

You are doing a great job with your story. There is only one thing you need to do to make it a scary creepypasta. Instead of saying "scary looking lady" give us details of what the lady looks like that makes her so terrifying. If you manage to describe the ghosts/monsters in a very descriptive way t...
by DIRUSNOCTIS
Sun Jun 10, 2018 1:40 am
Forum: Writers Showcase
Topic: DEATH FROM THE DEATHSON FAMILY
Replies: 7
Views: 3490

Re: DEATH FROM THE DEATHSON FAMILY

Something else I forgot to mention is giving the murderers a name that obviously has the word death in it takes all the suspense out of the story because you will know who the murderer is. There will be nothing scary about the story, I'm sorry to say.
by DIRUSNOCTIS
Sun Jun 10, 2018 1:37 am
Forum: Writers Showcase
Topic: DEATH FROM THE DEATHSON FAMILY
Replies: 7
Views: 3490

Re: DEATH FROM THE DEATHSON FAMILY

Just so you know, murder is overrated and doesn't make a story creepy or scary. What you need to do is slowly create strange events that lead to a conflict with a murderer or a terrifying creature. You also need to make sure the character suspects nothing at the beginning of the story unless you fin...
by DIRUSNOCTIS
Sun Jun 10, 2018 1:31 am
Forum: Suggestions and Feedback On The Site And Forum
Topic: New here!
Replies: 3
Views: 2117

Re: New here!

I would also like to know what you are writing about and maybe I'll read it.
by DIRUSNOCTIS
Sun Jun 10, 2018 1:23 am
Forum: Suggestions and Feedback On The Site And Forum
Topic: Really Unique Suggestions
Replies: 1
Views: 1220

Really Unique Suggestions

While many good creepypastas are unique, something I've noticed is people don't take ideas like Yokai from Japanese mythology and specific types of demons from many other culture's mythology or religion. People should also take creepy nightmares they used to have and twist it into something terrifyi...
by DIRUSNOCTIS
Sun Jun 10, 2018 1:15 am
Forum: Suggestions and Feedback On The Site And Forum
Topic: New here!
Replies: 3
Views: 2117

Re: New here!

You find the rules at FAQ. This page is for frequently asked questions. Find the question,"Why would my pasta be rejected?" on the original website creepypasta.com click the link. It will show you what is and isn't tolerated.