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LakeFace (OC creepypasta narration)

Posted: Sun Sep 08, 2019 12:27 pm
by final_Report
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=X4T1htSbXZU

I wrote this story on a sleepless night. I don't usually write about urban legends and such topics but I enjoyed making this one. I hope you guys like the story and the narration! :) Let me know what you think.

LakeFace (OC creepypasta narration)

Posted: Wed Sep 18, 2019 9:49 pm
by TheSandman
Hey man! love the story. Only feedback I have, can you maybe slow down a bit when reading. Had a hard time trying to "jump" into the story myself. Other than that bro, loved the story! Keep it up.

Mind checking mine out and give me a few pointers?????
https://youtu.be/gJOwD8IYbN0